Please don't leave, live



With her head hung low,
Flowed the tears from her eye.
With the wind,
Blew the memories of her life.
Eyes constantly searching for peace,
Only to be met with the painted sky.
She knew it'd be hard to commit,
But somewhere she wanted her soul to get mixed with it.

Although there was a hope
Telling her to cope
With the difficulties
she didn't want to face
All she needed
Was her mother to embrace
Disheartened she's no longer there
She wanted to meet her
But didn't knows where
For, she was only in her prayer.

The disjointed memories
Which she wanted to repair
But she wasn't prepared.
Life was being unfair
And she was aware
That there was no one who cared
About the pain she didn't share.

Her life now just being compared
She didn't have a smile to wear.
It wasn't a thing one can dare
To eye the darkness which stared

She felt herself tearing apart,
As she lost all her hope.
But little did she know
There was a little left
With the benevolent sunset
And with the nature
Which had her owned.
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Written on September 30, 2022

Submitted by pratibhasatpudke on September 30, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme ABXXXBCC DDEFXFGHGG EGIGGIG IGGI XDAXXHX
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 1,004
Words 211
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 8, 10, 7, 4, 7

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