Still there, or gone?!



The love is still there,
But the fun is gone.
It is simply not fair
To love you alone.

The love is still there,
But your innocence is gone.
I simply can't bare
The path you put me on.

Your body is Still there,
But your heart is far gone
I know you may actually care
But our chances were blown

Our dreams are still there
Even if the hope is gone
I love you, but shouldn't dare
wish for a newer dawn
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Submitted on February 05, 2015

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme Abac Abax abac abab
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 382
Words 83
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4

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