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  April 2021     6 hours ago

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Consciously Unconscious To Be

Consciously unconscious to be!

When did proven evidence collected,
Become doubted to suspect it.
Denied and eventually rejected.

Yet deception to fiction truth is debated.
For hours, days, months and years.
Over the value of what reality...

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Blessed Occurrences

Those blessed occurrences.
Unavoidable to notice,
When they are delivered to be given.
Without it to wonder or ask,
Who it may be to disbelieve...
From where they come.
On a path taken alone.
Towards the unknown.
Discovering a feeling too...

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If Not There

If not there,
To care, share or experience the life.
Others live.
Without concern or that to give.
Yet assume to know,
Their every move.
And what they do on a daily basis.
From morning, noon and night time too!
Who gives you the right,
To...

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Rudiments

Without the rudiments of anything.
One seeks to accomplish.
From a witnessing observed,
At a distance.
To believe a task,
Made to look easy to succeed.
Yet takes patience, time and dedication.
And often years to develope,
Making it seem...

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No Trespassing (Part Two)

If I can listen to you.
Knowing this you can not do.
As you expect me to sit.
Hearing your nonsense.
Without taking a breath.
While I am waiting to anticipate,
Something meaningful to learn.
Tolerating with patience.
And my time wasted to...

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Chris? 'Wrapped Up In You'...is brilliantly written. From beginning to end. Yes! Within your expression so much you allow to confess just how you feel. After MANY years of my own poetic writings, I am only recently unpeeling to reveal what it is deeply felt. Easy I've become to realize isn't easy. Thank you. L 

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Mr. Chris E. Morganroth IV? You, sir, are a tremendous artist. Your approach reminds me of Poe. Heartfelt. Deep in expression. Yet, available to the reader. That to do, is an accomplishment. Basic in delivery. Yet touches emotions few poets are unable to commit the doing of it. Congratulations! L 

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Geeessshhh, this is terrific imagery.
Nice.

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Hmmm, 'Amazing' Huh? Well...okay! (Smile)

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Hi, amandak.. Thank you for your comments. Now and then, I feel I must reveal some insight into my background.

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Hi, JdeLorenzo08. Thank you for your comments. It makes me happy

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Enrique, thank you for ur comment.

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Thank you 4 comments.

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Hi, amandak.45897, thank you very much. Lawrence

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Hi, Edwin...your comments remind me of what I use to experience on another poetry website. Now, today? I make sure what I write is done. Then close out my submission to Poetry.com. I've also changed my password a few times as well. 

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Hi, Edwin Ray...thank you for your latest comments. Although, I must admit this, I have no idea what they mean. Explain.

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Be easy with that Breezy feeling

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I lived on Perrin Beital Road. Between 410 and 1604. The bigger loop surrounding San Antonio. Back in the 80s.

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Hi Edwin. Don't allow your creative process prevent to stop what this 'force' chooses you to do. Through your poetic revelations. Edwin? You and I both have been blessed with a gift. Know this. 

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Edwin? One day we have to meet. You know, I actually lived in San Antonio, Texas yrs ago. I love that place. Thanks again for your 'right on comments'. Wonderful they are to read.

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