talygarza
  Gold Member

This poem is beautiful captures an entire feeling for trees.

Loneliness is creative just for writing. Well done.

“Peace and rewards” is nice mention in your poem.

Clever and funny poem treating something different as poetic object.

Stunning image and the poem is encouraging and creative.

I see like the thread in your poems is love and romantic issues and relations. Nice.

A poem that reminds dawn

Very smart appreciation since the frog’s view, of course metaphorical.

Very emotional poem

thanks for rating it is very appreciated.

This anti war poem is heartbreaking, no words to express the enormous pain wars bring although this human tendency to violence and self destruction continues between groups or nations. This poem is indicative of the tragedy behind every single life that ends in wars. more »

This poem brings good vibes for someone who feels hopeless, a bad emotion that human beings often carries.

oh no is just practice, I try to write all days at least one page. No imitation and if I can I like rhymes in Spanish, although I love free verse I distrust enthusiasm about free verse, anyway I respect the right to write whatever a person wants. more »

Dramatic, stunning image, another stanza would be grate enhancing the poem.

I liked the sincerity showing a detachment, you could explore more that kind of emotions, not everything needs to be about happiness, the thing is to write something that can engage readers.