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Would it be

Date Written: September 22, 2017

Would it be ok if I took some of your time?
Would it be ok if I wrote you a rhyme?
Would it be ok if I opened my heart?
Would it be ok if I took on the part
Of being your man and showed you a view,
One that only a real man could do?
Would it be ok if I could make you smile?
Would it be ok if I held you awhile?
Would it be ok if I kissed your face?
Would it be ok if I were to replace
All the men in your past that just wouldn’t do .

3 comments on “Would it be”

  1. Muminah Sabura Muhammad     September 22, 2017

    Beautiful absolutely Beautiful

  2. Robert Randle     September 23, 2017

    Too wordy

  3. Bayou     September 30, 2017

    Cute

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