Analysis of A Revelation
In trouble times.
Where fire and water collide.
Destruction and chaos go hand to hand.
Where there is destruction.
Pain and suffering is found.
Where there is chaos you will find.
Nightmares unending,
A volcanic eruption of emotions.
Make peace seem almost impossible
to grasp. Hope slips through your fingertips.
Thunder crashes parting the heavens.
Ground shakes, trembling through your core.
Seven angel trumpets sound.
They wale across the crimson sky.
The hours fade away slipping through
the hour glass of time.
Across the stars among Dracos lair.
Riding across serpents tail.
An impossible dream.
You try to shake to wake up.
The Archangel Michael stares. I am
drawned by his immaculate glow.
See a short grin, a broken smile, a single
tear runs down his face as he lifts his sword.
Swaying it around his shoulders.
Everything is in slow motion.
Droplets of rain suspended in mid-air
Captured in a time capsel under
Archangel's grasp.
A bright light shines.
I blink and close my eyes.
Not knowing the outcome.
Warp through a worm hole.
Gravity takes a toil on me.
I start to float. Feel weightless
with no control.
I hear a whisper calling out to me.
It's all up to you! Being dragged through
a black hole.
I hit the ground and stand alone.
Distraught, Silence roams the air.
Holding my soul in a single bliss of
despair. Not sure if this is reality.
I start to realize this is it.
There is no turning back.
The future is upon me.
A revelation in the making.
I come back to earth and hit the ground.
One more time I hear the trumpets sound.
I start to pray and leave it up to fate.
I wake up with a rosary in my hand.
I open my eyes and see,
Archangel Michael smiling back at me
on a picture frame. In a hospital bed
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Metre | 0101 11001001 0100101111 111010 1010011 11110111 1010 0010101010 11110100 11111110 101010010 11100111 1010101 11010101 010101101 010111 01010111 1001101 101001 1111111 01010111 11101001 10110101010 1111111111 10101110 1010110 1011010011 10001110 11 0111 110111 11001 11011 10010111 1111110 1101 1101010111 111111011 011 11010101 0110101 1011001011 011111110 11110111 111101 0101011 00100010 111110101 111110101 1111011111 11110100011 1101101 101010111 1010100101 |
Closest metre | Iambic tetrameter |
Characters | 1,753 |
Words | 373 |
Sentences | 48 |
Stanzas | 9 |
Stanza Lengths | 3, 5, 4, 4, 4, 9, 7, 7, 11 |
Lines Amount | 54 |
Letters per line (avg) | 25 |
Words per line (avg) | 6 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 150 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 35 |
About this poem
I wrote this in a random dream I had. With everything that is going on in the world today. It makes you stop in think almost as though your stuck in a trance.
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Written on April 20, 2024
Submitted by axbarajas0419 on March 02, 2024
Modified by axbarajas0419 on June 09, 2024
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