My sun.



Prom.

Porm.

Poem.

Eon.


Whatever the form,
it’s always me,
on

a quest
to find
the perfect way
to wish you well…

to wrest
to try
to punch your arm
to squeeze you tight
to talk til moments move from day to night…

A well,

of feelings.
Drowned.
Without sound.

Our talk was muted
with no choice
AND FAIR ENOUGH.

Them’s the rules.

I miss you.


Life is tough.



Ah well.

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Submitted by SWIFT on April 23, 2024

Modified by SWIFT on April 28, 2024

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Quick analysis:

Scheme XXX AXXX AXXBB XCC XXD X X D
Closest metre Iambic dimeter
Characters 395
Words 103
Stanzas 8
Stanza Lengths 3, 4, 5, 3, 3, 1, 1, 1

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