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Post Arrival

Date Written: September 22, 2017

He said, "don't squeeze too tightly!"
"Else i end up crumbling down"
"These old bag of bones are rattling"
"And i don't wish to stain your gown"

So she held him ever so gently
It felt good to feel him again
Even though he was skin n bones
And coughing up some phlegm

His bony ribs were rattling
Which made her softly snort
His rattling and her snorting
Made music which couldn't be bought

All those times she missed him
Were gone in just a flash
Now his rattling self was here
In time for cornbeef mash!

4 comments on “Post Arrival”

  1. elvis sinatra     September 22, 2017

    5 exclamation points!!!!!

  2. comnpkpillai     September 22, 2017

    Rattling self ,changes
    Nice poem

  3. Joeys Wonder Girl     September 23, 2017

    This is sooo different but still good, thanks! 🙂

  4. River.Ophelia     September 23, 2017


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