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New Age Trends

Date Written: September 6, 2017
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An age where we can talk to everyone

But nobody knows what to say

It's getting old and lost it's fun

Out off style and so passé 

 

I have scars on the inside of my mouth

Because I'm talking to myself

It hurts my jaw with out a doubt 

Looking at the life of someone else

 

We all get lost in the vanity

It takes the human out of humanity

Such a sad calamity 

We soak up life with a battery

 

Caught up in all the new age trends

Missing all my digital friends

Devolving feels like such a sin 

Hiding behind a self portrait grin

11 comments on “New Age Trends”

  1. comnpkpillai     September 8, 2017

    True, but confusion, fear delinquency and ultimately criminal tendency and plunge into
    Failures is a new order ,good theme

  2. comnpkpillai     September 9, 2017

    Wonderful

  3. Robert Randle     September 10, 2017

    Good.

  4. Zip Zappa     September 11, 2017

    Well spoken verses, love the message, the flow, and thoughts you stirred with this piece. Great Job!

  5. Kuazymoto     September 11, 2017

    Really interesting poem. Well structured, & an interesting take on things most people overlook due to our society being so about staying as .oder as possible.

  6. poetessmichelle     September 16, 2017

    Very good poem and so true, I think we have lost ourselves with the ever changing technology. You have articulated this so well in your poem.

  7. Sonja Carnes     September 18, 2017

    Excellent work

  8. Sonja Carnes     September 18, 2017

    Excellent poem here! Bravo

  9. Omar Avila     October 7, 2017

    Bravo!

  10. azzow2     October 9, 2017

    I have always been a curious soul. I have people watched for eons. I have always enjoyed a conversation with the aged and wise. This experience has made me rather wise to the people that hide behind a computer screen. Do get me wrong any interaction is welcome however there is nothing like experiencing sight in 3D touch smell pheromones that you almost never detect hearing the echoing of a sound wave bouncing in you ear in some cases you even get to the and taste a living being. Just ramblings. Good rune

  11. Stella Grosso     October 11, 2017

    I can not find my copyrighted poem “Sometimes” in which I received an editors choice award in 2008.

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