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Whisper

Date Written: October 8, 2017
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Those stars , dripped lights from far away 

Because we fell ,we did collapse a bit ,bit deeper than supposed .

we lost direction .

was cold , wet grass.our blindness walked barefooted .

it s winter , love ,it s winter s green.It s spreading shivers through our toes.

3 comments on “Whisper”

  1. Matt G     October 8, 2017

    Can’t pin point it, but I really like this. Nice work.

  2. J.Riversky     October 9, 2017

    Thank you !
    It s about creating some metapforic space to allow fragile emotions to exist .something like this …meat to be felt mostly

  3. J.Riversky     October 9, 2017

    “Metaphoric ” and “meant” ….writing on an iPhone sorry

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