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Date Written: October 23, 2017

Sun met the Moon

The Moon made the two

The two around the Sun

Took cared with a Star.


Sun met a Star

A star made the five

And took care the two

A Star so wonderful.


Sun made Mercury

The first from the Moon

A true not a mystery

Raised by a Star.


Sun made Venus

The last with the moon

Before the Moon was gone

And Star became a mom.


Sun made Earth

Alike with glasses

The Earth not a myth

The first from a Star.


Sun made Mars

The first beauty girl

The second from Star

And big old sis.


Sun made Jupiter

The third of Star

The fifth so far

To call sister.


Sun met a meteor

And they made the one

The one became Saturn

The sixth lovely person.


Sun made Neptune

Among lovely son

A son of the Sun

The forth of Star.


Sun made Uranus

The last of the rest

The writer of this

For Star is the fifth.


Sun met Pluto

The far unknown Planet

Undefined from the rest

And defined to the one.



2 comments on “THE SOLAR SYSTEM”

  1. Joeys Wonder Girl     October 23, 2017

    Awww!!! This was the sweetest n coolest space poem I’ve read for ages, thnx heaps!!!!! 🙂 🙂 🙂

    1. Maulidi Kassanga     October 24, 2017

      Thank you !

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