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morning ocean dip

Date Written: November 12, 2017



morning waters on my sunkissed skin

long, flowing tresses bobbing within

cleansing, refreshingly cool feel

light blue, thin sarong long ago peeled

crisp, salty air filling my lungs

thought bubbles of dreams lovingly spun

memories of your kiss lingering still

weather is warm and inviting to lill



6 comments on “morning ocean dip”

  1. Uma Natarajan     November 12, 2017

    Weather is really warm nice

    1. River.Ophelia     November 12, 2017

      weather is beautiful, thank you Uma πŸ™‚

  2. comnpkpillai     November 12, 2017

    Air,water,light,and warmth
    Very natural feeling

    1. River.Ophelia     November 12, 2017

      refreshing nature, thank you πŸ™‚

  3. JessicaMars     November 12, 2017

    I took a lunch time swim today as it’s workday here … spontaneously… strange feeling and now that I read your poem… I understand… beautiful poem

    1. River.Ophelia     November 13, 2017

      kindred minds think alike…
      thank you πŸ™‚

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