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your thrilling pleasure

Date Written: November 6, 2017



lingering memory of your kiss
my fingertips tracing my lips

hairs rising from the nape of my neck
your soft mouth would brush and peck

lost in the reveries of my mind
looking for you, hoping to find

torturing myself quite willingly
seeking your pleasure so thrillingly



9 comments on “your thrilling pleasure”

  1. mkiarie     November 6, 2017

    i really relate to this piece! love it

  2. River.Ophelia     November 6, 2017

    thank you so much!

  3. JessicaMars     November 6, 2017

    You invoke in me feelings I rather leave buried…or believe I want no part of it until I read one of your poems. The best poems for me as those that makes me ‘feel’ and you have the tendency to just that. Beautiful poem

    1. River.Ophelia     November 6, 2017


  4. Bongani     November 6, 2017

    You captured the deepness of my feelings with
    your sweet nectared-words that brings joy of
    contentment flowing through my bloo flow….
    I truly admire your sense of writting partten.

    #beautiful art.

    1. River.Ophelia     November 7, 2017

      thank you for your kind words Bongani … glad this piece brought you joy 🙂

  5. Bongani     November 6, 2017

    Keep up the good work flying forth.

  6. comnpkpillai     November 6, 2017

    a willing torture for pleasure

    1. River.Ophelia     November 7, 2017

      thank you for taking the time to read and comment on this 🙂

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