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Ambrosial Play

Date Written: September 19, 2017
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Ambrosial Play

 

A rose was flourishing

In the pot

Unknowingly in my heart

It tied a knot

 

Its beauty moved me

I used to give appreciation flank

Several pink fresh petals

In my heart sank

 

One day it peeped

Through my window

On the wall fell

Its fragrant shadow

 

Fragrant shadow of

The charming rose

On my mind

Ambrosial play of poetry and prose

4 comments on “Ambrosial Play”

  1. Sonia Crt     September 20, 2017

    beautiful poem
    lovely concept
    great work

    1. Subhashchandra B Adhav     September 21, 2017

      Thanks generous Sonia for your beautiful review and heartfelt comment !!

  2. JessicaMars     September 20, 2017

    It’s simply beautiful….I can see the rose in my mind and smell its sweet fragrance. A poem that invokes my senses is worthy of praise. Excellent read

    1. Subhashchandra B Adhav     September 21, 2017

      Thanks generous Jessica for your beautiful review and heartfelt comment !!

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