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Date Written: October 18, 2017



They took me to High Mountain

And pushed me from high altitude

Surprisingly I was not fallen

But fallen was my attitude


In deep valley

My attitude received a great shock

It became numb

And stood as a rock


Afterwards fallen was

My virtue

And on the attitudinal rock

It stood as statue


The rock and statue

Suffered deep darkness

However they were

True lovers of brightness



My attitude bounced back

And came out of shock

It was now

No more rock


Climbed up the altitude

My gritty attitude

She forgot the past

And became flag-mast


Also my precious virtue

Came out of statue

Climbed up altitude

With great gratitude


My virtue received a tag

And became flag

Fluttering flag on the mast

Compelled me to forget past

3 comments on “Comeback”

  1. Spiritual Honey 108     October 19, 2017

    Excellent expression of becoming victorious over your initial fallen attitude. Very well done. Thoroughly enjoyed the flow.

    1. Subhashchandra B Adhav     October 19, 2017

      Thanks a million SH108 for your beautiful review and spirited comment !!!
      Happy Diwali to you !!!

  2. Subhashchandra B Adhav     October 23, 2017

    Happy comeback to all my readers!

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