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Death of a star

Date Written: September 30, 2017

Death of a star


In the halo of cosmic mirth

A star longed to take birth

The lovable delighted earth –

Witness to its awesome birth


It shone bright with all its might

It thought it could woo the night

It shone brighter and brighter

As night became darker and darker


It was rather innocent and hopeful

It never knew the sky was deceitful

All co-stars and cosmic bodies wore mask

Their genuineness it did not bother to ask


It glowed at par excellence

But in vast expanse, dot- like its existence

Infinity and negligence killed its virtue radiant

This is how, slowly died the star brilliant

4 comments on “Death of a star”

  1. Uma Natarajan     September 30, 2017

    Good brilliant excellent

    1. Subhashchandra B Adhav     September 30, 2017

      Thanks a million for your nice review.

  2. sunburned     September 30, 2017

    Very nice picture,good poem……………..kudos.

    1. Subhashchandra B Adhav     September 30, 2017

      Thanks indeed for your nice appreciation.

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