Poetry.com

2 161 8

Defunct Alarm

Date Written: September 30, 2017
Categories:
 

Defunct Alarm

 

I Wonder

Why my sun is not called a sun

So also my moon a moon

Not seen the stars in my sky

Artificial stars they do try

Ocean lured with false oath

Breached are river and rivulet both

Mirage is accepted as lake

Clouds are purchased with notes fake

Snatched is horizon with talks cunning warm

Reality frozen and calm

Hypocrisy gains radiance and charm

Truth a defunct alarm

8 comments on “Defunct Alarm”

  1. Anonyma Magnifique     September 30, 2017

    …a good poem enquiring of disillusionment…alarms the reader to feel less than jubilant…!!…thank you for sharing…!! πŸ™‚

    1. Subhashchandra B Adhav     September 30, 2017

      Thanks so kindly AM for your critical comment !!—
      Have you changed your user name?

      1. Anonyma Magnifique     September 30, 2017

        …the names may change…but the song remains the same…!! πŸ˜‰

        1. Subhashchandra B Adhav     October 1, 2017

          Okay !!! I just wanted to confirm it —-Hope you will delight readers with your brilliant songs on the new site too !!
          Thanks and warm regards !!

  2. Joeys Wonder Girl     October 1, 2017

    This one is very deep, wow!!! What does it mean? πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚

    1. Subhashchandra B Adhav     October 1, 2017

      Thanks a lot for your comment—
      The poet gives vent to his annoyance when his genuine merit is ignored or suppressed !!

  3. Uma Natarajan     October 1, 2017

    A very good poem with beautiful sentences
    Each one is a gem having depth

    1. Subhashchandra B Adhav     October 1, 2017

      Thanks so kindly for your excellent review and nice appreciation.

Leave a Reply

Image Diwali Celebration Diwali Celebration Diwali is the festival preciousIt is full of moments…
by Subhashchandra B Adhav
0 105 2
Image We Won We Won Our souls were not soldOur love became boldWe were…
by Subhashchandra B Adhav
0 28 4
Image Comeback Comeback They took me to High MountainAnd pushed me from high…
by Subhashchandra B Adhav
1 120 2

Subhashchandra B Adhav

share
ADD TO COLLECTION
Register
Send message