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Eroding Beauties

Date Written: October 1, 2017
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Eroding Beauties

 

Spread everywhere

Fragrance of sandal

A matchstick lighted

The devoted candle

 

I wish to fondle

Wearing out sandal

I wish to fondle

Diminishing candle

 

Be it, fragrant sandal

Or lustrous candle

Life’s eroding beauties

Respectfully we could handle

4 comments on “Eroding Beauties”

  1. sunburned     October 1, 2017

    Some good rhyming, kudos

    1. Subhashchandra B Adhav     October 1, 2017

      Thanks generous for your kind review.

  2. Uma Natarajan     October 2, 2017

    Subtle feelings, very good picture, candle symbolizing dimnishing beauty as it melts

  3. Stella V     October 4, 2017

    Exceptional Beauty Adhav!!– The fragrant candle — Love the composition!!!

    The lovely scent– candle beauty!!!

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