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I’m an awesome entity

Date Written: October 4, 2017
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I’m an awesome entity

 

I am a source of infinite energy

Stunning is my ubiquitous synergy

Resides within me, the entire universe

All that I can’t put into verse

 

My body is just a daily useful bowl

In the abyss deep within, lives the soul

Flesh, blood and bones are just parts

They are meaningless when the soul departs

 

When I peep inside of me ,what an amazing design

Symmetry of the body is, His marvellous creative sign

Two sparkling eyes, two fine ears, two hands and two feet

He meticulously keeps the body all time fit

 

He has enhanced wonderfully my body’s merit

He has poured inside all necessary spirit

He has given me beautiful heart and mind

Within me a glorious heaven I can find

 

 

Inside of me, a treasure of virtues

It enlivened inner thousand statues

True light is within me, so also true delight

With blissful spirit any bogey man, I can fight

 

Really I’m an awesome entity

Body, mind and soul’s amazing unity

I’m a true unceasing fountain of joy

Mundane and spiritual, both lives I enjoy

7 comments on “I’m an awesome entity”

  1. JessicaMars     October 4, 2017

    Exceptional read… similar to my sentiments expressed in ‘Things’ and reading your poem, I feel like I met God as you introduce Him to me in your poem

    1. Subhashchandra B Adhav     October 4, 2017

      Many thanks so kindly Jessica for your genuine incredible words !!—-Yes!! you’ve expressed the same sentiments in your poem “Things”—–Coincidence we might say !!—-Kudos to you on your beautiful write !!–
      Have a blissful day!!

  2. Stella V     October 4, 2017

    Awesome Entity— It conveys meticulously — A Serenity needed —
    With the sign of the times!! Extraordinary Compassion– Infinite Energy Adhav!!

    Have an Extraordinary Day!!

    1. Subhashchandra B Adhav     October 5, 2017

      Thank you so much Dear Stella for your fabulous review and nice comment—
      You too have an extraordinary day with superb blessing !!

  3. Uma Natarajan     October 5, 2017

    Extraordinary poem serene

    1. Subhashchandra B Adhav     October 5, 2017

      Thank you so much Uma for your kind and meticulous review !!

  4. QUEEN D     October 6, 2017

    yes you are awesome, He uses you to touch others, I liked the part ( they are meaningless ) ……. because we are just vessels & the soul moves on. Have a blessed 2017

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