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Inner Eye

Date Written: October 8, 2017

Inner Eye


I caressed your eye-lashes

Touching those tiny silky bristles

I built in air delicate castles

Fondling your eye-brows

I felt within me something electric grows

I embraced your eye-lids

I realized your passionate needs

My fantastic will

Took it me to the pupil

Under the influence of affectionate mania

It entered the cornea

Your optic nerve

Cause of my insightful verve

I fully went to the abyss of your eye

Losing my being drowned was I

Enlightened by your sight, I came out of your eye

Some change came over me and changed was I

When I was preparing to enter your eye second

My mind was entirely jocund

However I was surprised to know

In the second eye you were blind

Means you were half blind

My nerves got shock electric of its kind

However you forthwith opened your inner mind

In your inner mind was placed your inner eye

I couldn’t choose but open my inner I

Through my inner I

I entered your inner eye

4 comments on “Inner Eye”

  1. Uma Natarajan     October 8, 2017

    Superb I have no words to acclaim and applaud

    1. Subhashchandra B Adhav     October 9, 2017

      Many thanks so kindly Uma for your heartfelt review and elegant comment !!

  2. Uma Natarajan     October 8, 2017

    Please do comment on my sketches

    1. Subhashchandra B Adhav     October 9, 2017

      Okay !!!—–With pleasure !!

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