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Mary! Will You Marry Me ?

Date Written: November 6, 2017

Mary! Will You Marry Me?


Mary! Will you marry me?

On a green pasture

Merriment you and me

With clasped hands

That passionate rapport

Through melodious words

Your whole hearted support

When we would walk along

With steps long

Bluish scarlet sky

For it, we would forever long

We’d win gardens

And plants therein

We’d win colourful flowers

And black bees therein

Winners we; our win-win attitude

Would raise our love to high altitude

Gentle breezes would refresh our breaths

Our hearts garlanded with wreaths

Mary! Our knot nuptial silky

Would brighten way milky

Mary! Our joy would generate

Our world own

In the cosmos vast

Love seeds would be sown

Mary! Will you marry me?

To speak love, to reap love

To breath love, to live love

Love, love and love!

6 comments on “Mary! Will You Marry Me ?”

  1. mkiarie     November 6, 2017

    I love this

    1. Subhashchandra B Adhav     November 6, 2017

      Thank you so much to love my poem!!

  2. comnpkpillai     November 6, 2017

    love to live
    well done

    1. Subhashchandra B Adhav     November 6, 2017

      Thank you so much for your kind words!!

  3. Bongani     November 6, 2017

    What a delightful moments of love that makes the heart skip a beat,
    words propsals that fascinates deep emotions of Marry…the woman
    whose heart leaps joyfuly in a beautiful garden….feeling valuable
    and more special than anything in the world because of romance
    shown to her….as rare as the germstone.

    Love it`s powerful message….( Matrimony is what makes spouses
    feel like they are on top of the world because of the love they produce in
    each other)

    #brilliant love poem.
    Keep your hand itching with fine poetry to write more of this.

    1. Subhashchandra B Adhav     November 6, 2017

      Great many thanks so kindly for your indepth review,nice appreciation and heartfelt praise!!

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