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Our Relationship

Date Written: October 31, 2017

Our relationship  

I thought 

Our  relationship is 

As stout as eagle 

It w'd awfully soar high 

And  touch the blue sky 

However it turned out to be 

A fragile butterfly 

With feeble wings 

It does fly 

Thorns of flowers make it cry 

And I heave a desperate sigh!! 



4 comments on “Our Relationship”

  1. Uma Natarajan     October 31, 2017

    Fragile relationship really delicate, neat expression

    1. Subhashchandra B Adhav     October 31, 2017

      Thanks a million Uma for your kind words.

  2. Stella V     October 31, 2017

    Terrific write Adhav!! Lovely Poetry!!

    Have a great day!!

    1. Subhashchandra B Adhav     November 1, 2017

      Great many thanks so kindly Dear Stella for your magnificent comment !!

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