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Wheel

Date Written: October 14, 2017
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Wheel

 

What is in store for us?

Boys anxious think fate and time

On mazy mundane play board

It’s your easy going pastime

 

Ignorant boys know not thy will

Fortune turns like a wheel

What way will find their will

When with icy hands witch sounds shrill

 

Ferris wheel uncertainty glorious

Wayfarers gather with souls curious

Mysterious wheel rotates with concealed will

Boys you play on and mind wagon wheel

6 comments on “Wheel”

  1. Uma Natarajan     October 14, 2017

    Mysterious wheel rotates, life’s term it tries to dictate, along with fate instigates, all happenings it creates fantastic poem

    1. Subhashchandra B Adhav     October 14, 2017

      Thanks a bunch Uma for your excellent review and nice appreciation !!1

  2. Stella V     October 14, 2017

    Brilliant Analogy Adhav!! — Superb — Such diversity and Talent!!

    1. Subhashchandra B Adhav     October 15, 2017

      Thank you very much so kindly Stella for your superb review and superlative comment !!

    2. Subhashchandra B Adhav     October 15, 2017

      Happy Deepawali Stella !!!
      Have a blissful bright day !!

  3. Jawahar Gupta     October 16, 2017

    Wheel of life turns like a cycle
    I love Subhash.
    Mysterious wheel rotates with concealed will……

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