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Startling

Date Written: November 11, 2017
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Strong gust of wind shakes

And the sunshine awakes

Its Rays startle

Leaves sway like turtle

Their slow motion protect me

From the hot sun touching me

Their sudden stillness gives me shade

I dig the land with spade

 

 

2 comments on “Startling”

  1. Spiritual Honey 108     November 12, 2017

    Good. Good. Focus avoids distraction bringing stillness. Yes. Excellent.

  2. River.Ophelia     November 12, 2017

    beautiful imagery
    “Leaves sway like turtle” … unique description
    I loved it…

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