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Visible vision

Date Written: November 7, 2017
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Behind the visible vision

Defenders rush under mission

Whispers of crowd to listen

Discerned voices with intermission

Myriad banished efforts with wrong notion

Act as intervention 

And ending in bloodshed and law's violition 

4 comments on “Visible vision”

  1. Joeys Wonder Girl     November 7, 2017

    Ur such a good writer mrs natrajan but soz can u tell me what this one means pls?? 🙂 🙂 🙂

    1. Uma Natarajan     November 7, 2017

      It is about mob psychology our friend comnpkpillai guessed it right.

  2. comnpkpillai     November 7, 2017

    mob psychology is unpredictable
    choice of bloodshed or bloodless.
    some times beyond expectation

  3. River.Ophelia     November 7, 2017

    powerful precision in delivery
    I loved it…

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