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While you're away

I gaze out my window, morning has broke
The birds are beginning to sing
There's frost on the ground, a chill in the air
This is the first day of spring
I grab a quick bite, put on my coat
And journey outside for a while
Just walking around, enjoying the view
Serenity without a smile
Thinking of you, since you've been gone
My heart feels a sadness inside
A day without you, is a lifetime to me
I need what your heart provides
I dream of your touch, your soft caress
The smell of your beautiful hair
Kissing your neck, feeling your love
Each day seems too much to bare
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Poetry.com 4.6 out of 5 based on 0 ratings. 20 reviews.
Monica Hill More than 1 year ago
Suzanna Valliere More than 1 year ago
Very good! I am thoroughly convinced!
Rylene Irvin More than 1 year ago
It is good.
Amy Luxon More than 1 year ago
very vividly felt. 
Ariadne Sousa More than 1 year ago
I feel the love and the pain of loss.
CLINT More than 1 year ago
Sad and emotional, very good indeed 
David Ferguson More than 1 year ago
I see your words as once again, deep and heartfelt. You speak about a love that has left you for a time, and that you are waiting patiently for her/him (you don't specify) to once again have the same feeling of wholeness. It's simply beautiful.
Blake Grantham More than 1 year ago
I love the flow of your poetry.
Sommerlynn Ullrich 6 months ago
This one touches the soul! Love it.
Stacy Gaughan 5 months ago
Something we may hope to have...
Megan H 3 months ago
This is my favorite poem I've read on here!
I relly liked it a lot.
Domic Sands 5 days ago
Really good stuff
Steven Avolio More than 1 year ago
Love is in the air.
Jennifer Slayton More than 1 year ago
good writing
Renisha Murrell More than 1 year ago
really beautiful poem
Reena Sharma More than 1 year ago
Thank you for sharing this :)
Jesse Auchter 10 months ago
I could imagine the sum of all the lines. Great job!

Diane P Tabor 8 months ago
Felt your sadness
ALEN JOSHY 6 months ago
MaKeith Hedgepeth More than 1 year ago
message felt mourning
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