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Lessons learned

Do not worry if my mind goes blank
And my bodies still intact
Please forgive the things I say
And forgive the way I act
Lessons here we're learning
Although you may wonder why 
I'll tell you things you may not know
At least I'm sure I'll try
Our souls are on a journey
Lessons learned the great reward
Moving ever closer to
The Being we call Lord
It may be hard to comprehend this
We will suffer many times
But dealing with these hardships
Are the lessons of our life 
I hope the pain and mental torture
Disappear the day we die
Only then we will realize 
We truly are alive
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Poetry.com 4.7 out of 5 based on 0 ratings. 27 reviews.
Beth Sneed Phillips More than 1 year ago
Stay alive! Beautiful.
Scooped Aulbe More than 1 year ago
I really enjoyed this. Its hard to put words to something like that but you did a good job
S. Subhashini More than 1 year ago
Loved it.....
Mic Cinani More than 1 year ago
Yes we're Mr
Marie Pena More than 1 year ago
Really like your style of writing! I can relate to alot of your stuff....
You should take a look at one of mines when you get a chance.
http://poetry.com/poems/1617212-Your-You-Yourself
Many Rivers More than 1 year ago
The many pains in life are something we all sometimes ponder.  The Whys?  But many times as we look back we can see our growth in spite of the pain and yes sometimes torment.  The key is keeping our focus on the Lord and not our circumstance. I recall even Peter had a challenge with this as he saw Jesus walking on water, with his hand extended to Peter.  For the moments his eyes were on Jesus, he also was walking on water, but the moment his focus shifted to the storm he began to sink.  Oh if we could only remain focussed on Jesus, we too could walk on water through our storms. Beautiful expressed and I especially love the last stanza.  "What a day that will be."    Thank you for sharing. 
Cece Sparkle More than 1 year ago
My friends think that hardships are stupid. Well, you learn from them! Thank you for this poem :')
Bobby Childress More than 1 year ago
The poem reads of learning from adversity and moving closer to the Lord.
Ulian Kosie More than 1 year ago
Ok
Diana Sitnic More than 1 year ago
nice poem
joulnar khaldi More than 1 year ago
good
David Ferguson More than 1 year ago
I liked what you wrote, and resonates beautifully with your theme of dealing with hard times, about being grateful that you're still alive and breathing. It was very deep and heartfelt. Well done.
Amy Luxon More than 1 year ago
wow. I love this. you are REALLY good 
Amanda Gilroy-Smith 10 months ago
I can really relate to this. It is worded in such a way that many people should be able to connect here!. Wonderful  
Kimberly Ehrhart 8 months ago
Great poem! 
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ALEN JOSHY 4 months ago
QUITE ALLURING POEM
Betty Smith Collins 4 months ago
Much how I write... Love it...
Jude Garnett 3 months ago
It has such a great ominous feel to it when really pulls a sense of togetherness, I enjoyed it.
Tara Jean 3 months ago
Good
Vanessa Siegell-Sotak More than 1 year ago
Nice
Nikena Johnson More than 1 year ago
The lessons we learn in life never come easy
Yolanda Jones More than 1 year ago
good read
Michelle Dwyer Ortz More than 1 year ago
growing through lessons learned while on this earthly journey
Ariadne Sousa 12 months ago
I liked this.
Angela Christy More than 1 year ago
good rhyming!! i always had a problem with that
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