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this season

it is the season of giving,
thru a Spirit unseen living.

everyone with their own belief,
hanging on both sides was a thief;
one denying,
one crying,
each dying the same way,
one went to the Kingdom that day.
my heart is touched by His birth,
to save all of us on this earth.

it took time to believe,
my heart's pain He did retrieve.
my understanding He defined,
turning water into wine.
making parables conversation,
He has become my salvation.

take not lightly the Child born,
then pierced by life's thorn.
taking away our sin,
where would I begin...

once a;
crack addict, alcoholic, hater, manipulator, narcissist know it all, cheater,
convict, womanizer, extremely very angry person, selfish, & a simple
waist of flesh...
now a;
simple forgiven adopted child of God.

no religion,
ive seen where its all been.
no opinions or assumptions,
just true Godly convictions.
to love one another,
knowing all are my Sister & Brother.

peace be with you & yours during this celebration of Jesus' birthday,
for you & yours I always pray.
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Galina Valkova More than 1 year ago
  ( I come from a place of love )-"Slap-Slam-Trump" , please review the poem and the rest of my work and please spread the word
Poetry.com 4.5 out of 5 based on 0 ratings. 16 reviews.
Jawahar Gupta More than 1 year ago
Jawahar Gupta More than 1 year ago
Where have you Gone for such a long time?
Hope to read your more poems,
~~~~~~Jawahar Gupta ~~~
Jessica Leupitz More than 1 year ago
Loved this
Richard Stephan More than 1 year ago
@Peace @ricoSacto #ricoSacto
Maddy Young More than 1 year ago
very nice work
CLINT More than 1 year ago
A piece of work! Really enjoyed it
Wilder Carnes More than 1 year ago
Nice rhythm in the poem, great read!
sonia crt 9 months ago
well done
darren de leon 12 months ago
the message is clear, I got it
Louisa yiew 11 months ago
Shifat Bin Sadeque 7 months ago
A good one indeed
Sultan Hamad 8 months ago
Sharon Lofthouse 5 months ago
You took me by surprise when you shifted gears--saved the poem from being hackneyed.  I liked the forceful, no-nonsense quality--you have been there.  Not easy to write about beliefs, but this has a heartfelt feeling.  Thank you.
Winfrey Hewitt 29 days ago
It's got soul to it.
Jesse Auchter 10 months ago
Try not preaching about God.  Nobody likes it.

Joe Topich 12 months ago
You get lost in thoughts focus on one 
Martin McGill More than 1 year ago
"We love all humanity, but only under certain conditions."

"I need to control you for him."

"Take it."
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