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Farewell (3-5-3 haiku)

 
Dusk has come
goodbye in your eyes
dreams begin
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Poetry.com 4.5 out of 5 based on 0 ratings. 34 reviews.
TJ Bester 12 months ago
like the style
Sri Nagastram More than 1 year ago
thumbs up
John Cravens Sr. More than 1 year ago
Great job!
subhojit kar More than 1 year ago
smart and elegant
ryan wart More than 1 year ago
yes
Arnab Kumar Roy More than 1 year ago
Thank You
S. Subhashini More than 1 year ago
Good one ending in positive note..
Deakin McGinn More than 1 year ago
brilllliant
Bev Piercy More than 1 year ago
Now I am tempted to attempt writing in this style
Shama Javkar More than 1 year ago
:) :) :)
Arnab Kumar Roy More than 1 year ago
Thanks :)
Mahi Pant More than 1 year ago
+ve ending!
anish kumar More than 1 year ago
a three liner with a great meaning behind... good job
Arnab Kumar Roy More than 1 year ago
Thanks :)
sharon Talty More than 1 year ago
This poem compares nature,and love.
Franba Ciscon Ampermou More than 1 year ago
Like the deep thoughts its lead me.
Deryll Burkhead 9 months ago
I second and third that.
Aaron Mallory 11 months ago
All the times I had to reply to a goodbye before its time...
Cocoa Shawnee/ Imperfect Poetess 9 months ago
Good Job...
Stephanie Delacour 9 months ago
Short and beautifully written.
Bharathy Easwar 6 months ago
Short and sweet
Pls check out my poems too
Cyn Balunas 6 months ago
Keep up the great haikus.
Dimut 2u 4 months ago
i like this poem.
Nadia Ziad 13 days ago
Well structured, short but sweet.
ABhimanyu Gujjar 3 days ago
Good
Ellen Wolfson 3 days ago
It makes me want to know more!
Alexa Cooke More than 1 year ago
Nice. :) 
Irma Cowthern More than 1 year ago
Farewell is such a joy to read. The imagery is powerful, especially Line 2: "goodbye in your eyes - a great metaphor. What's more, this haiku has a soft pleasantnesss and flow.
Arnab Kumar Roy More than 1 year ago
Thanks :)
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