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Farewell (3-5-3 haiku)

 
Dusk has come
goodbye in your eyes
dreams begin
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Poetry.com 4.5 out of 5 based on 0 ratings. 29 reviews.
John Cravens Sr. More than 1 year ago
Great job!
ryan wart More than 1 year ago
yes
Arnab Kumar Roy More than 1 year ago
Thank You
Sri Nagastram More than 1 year ago
thumbs up
subhojit kar 11 months ago
smart and elegant
Shama Javkar More than 1 year ago
:) :) :)
Arnab Kumar Roy More than 1 year ago
Thanks :)
Deakin McGinn More than 1 year ago
brilllliant
sharon Talty More than 1 year ago
This poem compares nature,and love.
S. Subhashini More than 1 year ago
Good one ending in positive note..
Mahi Pant More than 1 year ago
+ve ending!
Franba Ciscon Ampermou More than 1 year ago
Like the deep thoughts its lead me.
anish kumar More than 1 year ago
a three liner with a great meaning behind... good job
Arnab Kumar Roy More than 1 year ago
Thanks :)
Aaron Mallory 7 months ago
All the times I had to reply to a goodbye before its time...
Deryll Burkhead 6 months ago
I second and third that.
Cocoa Shawnee/ Imperfect Poetess 6 months ago
Good Job...
Stephanie Delacour 5 months ago
Short and beautifully written.
Bev Piercy More than 1 year ago
Now I am tempted to attempt writing in this style
TJ Bester 9 months ago
like the style
Cyn Balunas 3 months ago
Keep up the great haikus.
Bharathy Easwar 3 months ago
Short and sweet
Pls check out my poems too
Dimut 2u 5 days ago
i like this poem.
Alexa Cooke More than 1 year ago
Nice. :) 
Irma Cowthern More than 1 year ago
Farewell is such a joy to read. The imagery is powerful, especially Line 2: "goodbye in your eyes - a great metaphor. What's more, this haiku has a soft pleasantnesss and flow.
Arnab Kumar Roy More than 1 year ago
Thanks :)
Josephus Chee More than 1 year ago
I enjoyed it
Mario Childress More than 1 year ago
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Diana Sitnic 6 months ago
its pretty good
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