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Farewell (3-5-3 haiku)

 
Dusk has come
goodbye in your eyes
dreams begin
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Poetry.com 4.4 out of 5 based on 0 ratings. 39 reviews.
TJ Bester More than 1 year ago
like the style
Sri Nagastram More than 1 year ago
thumbs up
John Cravens Sr. More than 1 year ago
Great job!
subhojit kar More than 1 year ago
smart and elegant
ryan wart More than 1 year ago
yes
Arnab Kumar Roy More than 1 year ago
Thank You
S. Subhashini More than 1 year ago
Good one ending in positive note..
Deakin McGinn More than 1 year ago
brilllliant
Bev Piercy More than 1 year ago
Now I am tempted to attempt writing in this style
Shama Javkar More than 1 year ago
:) :) :)
Arnab Kumar Roy More than 1 year ago
Thanks :)
Mahi Pant More than 1 year ago
+ve ending!
anish kumar More than 1 year ago
a three liner with a great meaning behind... good job
Arnab Kumar Roy More than 1 year ago
Thanks :)
sharon Talty More than 1 year ago
This poem compares nature,and love.
Franba Ciscon Ampermou More than 1 year ago
Like the deep thoughts its lead me.
Deryll Burkhead More than 1 year ago
I second and third that.
Aaron Mallory More than 1 year ago
All the times I had to reply to a goodbye before its time...
Cocoa Shawnee/ Imperfect Poetess More than 1 year ago
Good Job...
Stephanie Delacour More than 1 year ago
Short and beautifully written.
Bharathy Easwar 11 months ago
Short and sweet
Pls check out my poems too
Cyn Balunas 11 months ago
Keep up the great haikus.
Dimut 2u 9 months ago
i like this poem.
Nadia Ziad 6 months ago
Well structured, short but sweet.
ABhimanyu Gujjar 5 months ago
Good
Ellen Wolfson 5 months ago
It makes me want to know more!
Thopalli Venkat Ramamurthy 3 months ago
Should be expanded
Rubein Geterminah 7 days ago
The comparison between the first and the third line is clear.
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