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Farewell (3-5-3 haiku)

 
Dusk has come
goodbye in your eyes
dreams begin
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Poetry.com 4.4 out of 5 based on 0 ratings. 49 reviews.
Jennifer Lantry 9 months ago
I really like this!
subhojit kar More than 1 year ago
smart and elegant
Bonzell Joins, Jr. 4 months ago
good form
Ellen Wolfson More than 1 year ago
It makes me want to know more!
Cyn Balunas More than 1 year ago
Keep up the great haikus.
Mahi Pant More than 1 year ago
+ve ending!
Sri Nagastram More than 1 year ago
thumbs up
Nadia Ziad More than 1 year ago
Well structured, short but sweet.
Bev Piercy More than 1 year ago
Now I am tempted to attempt writing in this style
anish kumar More than 1 year ago
a three liner with a great meaning behind... good job
Arnab Kumar Roy More than 1 year ago
Thanks :)
Franba Ciscon Ampermou More than 1 year ago
Like the deep thoughts its lead me.
S. Subhashini More than 1 year ago
Good one ending in positive note..
Bharathy Easwar More than 1 year ago
Short and sweet
Pls check out my poems too
Deryll Burkhead More than 1 year ago
I second and third that.
Dimut 2u More than 1 year ago
i like this poem.
sonia crt 9 months ago
nice
TJ Bester More than 1 year ago
like the style
Miguel Brooks 6 days ago
Speaks so much yet in so little.
Lorenzoe Espinosa 10 days ago
Short but to the point
Rubein Geterminah 10 months ago
The comparison between the first and the third line is clear.
Shama Javkar More than 1 year ago
:) :) :)
Arnab Kumar Roy More than 1 year ago
Thanks :)
ryan wart More than 1 year ago
yes
Arnab Kumar Roy More than 1 year ago
Thank You
Aaron Mallory More than 1 year ago
All the times I had to reply to a goodbye before its time...
Cocoa Shawnee/ Imperfect Poetess More than 1 year ago
Good Job...
Stephanie Delacour More than 1 year ago
Short and beautifully written.
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