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My Eyes

Splash2 by louie B
When you are in learning,
have you wondered, should be learning?
Hard to admit?  Its not anger, its never pain....
We suffer for our hope. Hope in the everlasting....
When i was in learned i have wondered, i have dreamed.
I saw color, and vivid images of mankind.
I saw a people, separated. unseen, of the unimagined.
I was looking, at what i had seen.
I could not imagine the dwelling sorrow. of imaged anguish. and pain..
What were they was selling?
They published in vain, to ease stop the pain.
but the sycamore tree had grew no more.
To bear this burden, of hopeless, and anguish, and pain...
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Poetry.com 3.3 out of 5 based on 0 ratings. 8 reviews.
ARUN MAZUMDER More than 1 year ago
well done
Gajjar Devu More than 1 year ago
your life painfully.same problem some person.
Steven Ernest Lee Cummings More than 1 year ago
I would slowly describe each operation of feeling that you want to express. You have hidden thoughts that are undefined, I would love to see them.
Tristan Carungcong More than 1 year ago
Powerful visions..
BriAnne Ackerson More than 1 year ago
It was alright
Dawn Kvernenes More than 1 year ago
good start but ending fell a bit flat.
Poet Jahangir Rustom More than 1 year ago
a good poem
Misty Parrish More than 1 year ago
pretty good but the grammar doesnt seem to make sense in the grammatical sense like the one where it says when i was in learned i think that should be phrased a little different but overall a good poem
louie B More than 1 year ago
my past of learning. meaning learned. thank you
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