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My Eyes

Splash2 by louie B
When you are in learning,
have you wondered, should be learning?
Hard to admit?  Its not anger, its never pain....
We suffer for our hope. Hope in the everlasting....
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When i was in learned i have wondered, i have dreamed.
I saw color, and vivid images of mankind.
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I saw a people, separated. unseen, of the unimagined.
I was looking, at what i had seen.
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I could not imagine the dwelling sorrow. of imaged anguish. and pain..
What were they was selling?
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They published in vain, to ease stop the pain.
but the sycamore tree had grew no more.
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To bear this burden, of hopeless, and anguish, and pain...
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Poetry.com 3.3 out of 5 based on 0 ratings. 8 reviews.
ARUN MAZUMDER 22 days ago
well done
Gajjar Devu More than 1 year ago
your life painfully.same problem some person.
Steven Ernest Lee Cummings 22 days ago
I would slowly describe each operation of feeling that you want to express. You have hidden thoughts that are undefined, I would love to see them.
Poet Jahangir Rustom More than 1 year ago
a good poem
BriAnne Ackerson More than 1 year ago
It was alright
Tristan Carungcong More than 1 year ago
Powerful visions..
Dawn Kvernenes More than 1 year ago
good start but ending fell a bit flat.
Misty Parrish More than 1 year ago
pretty good but the grammar doesnt seem to make sense in the grammatical sense like the one where it says when i was in learned i think that should be phrased a little different but overall a good poem
louie B More than 1 year ago
my past of learning. meaning learned. thank you
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