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Dreamcatcher

Let me be your dreamcatcher,
let me follow through,
floating in your thoughts,
for you, I will sooth.

lay down, eyes shut to the world.
I wil make sure everythings right,
drift off into the night,
I will protect until sunlight.

Free yourself of unbroken thoughts,
your dreams, they taught,
drfeamcatcher, anybad is caught,
ciomfort, is what's brought.

Get tangles in the web,
unbroken ties of the past,
vivid hauntings you may have,
any battles, will no longer last.

Leave there in the dreamcatcher,
let only positive pass through,
sleep peacefully tonight,
dreamcatcher, be with you. 
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Dreamcatcher, by Holly Szurczynski 4.3 out of 5 based on 0 ratings. 15 reviews.
Nicholas Goffredo More than 1 year ago
What a beautiful thought. Someone who can guide us through the night. Help us skirt the pain and free us from suffering. Beautiful!!!! 
Randy Whitworth More than 1 year ago
 i dig it...
Shobha Raman More than 1 year ago
Nice poem
Travis Kelly More than 1 year ago
Loved it:)
J Beynon 6 months ago
LOVED IT!
Marie Wright More than 1 year ago
:)
Jerry Stiles 9 months ago
Great write ma'am,,,give darkpoetry.com a try,,
A lot of smart poets on there,,U'll love it,,
Bob Brennan More than 1 year ago
I really enjoy this, it has good imagery, good structure and rhyme. The only reason I didn't give it five is the 3rd section, it feels like you got writers block there and forced it so you could finish the piece.
Ashutosh Kumar More than 1 year ago
very nice thought
Joe's Vegetables More than 1 year ago
Ok
Stella W More than 1 year ago
goos job
bijim dominic More than 1 year ago
Good one
Jawahar Gupta More than 1 year ago
trust
love
light
and peace 
on Earth
~~~Jawahar Gupta ~~~
Jawahar Gupta 3 months ago
g
Ojoh Taiwo 20 days ago
I love the flow of line
helen nito More than 1 year ago
Good read.
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