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Being 18.

Being 18.
She is stuck in a dream
Being 18
Sitting on her bed dreaming
Of things gone by
and then sleeping
 
She sees angels flying
But she dose not know
That she is dying
Of a cancer eating up inside her
She fails to hear her grandson crying
“please grandma, keep on trying…”
“keep on fighting ..”
this demon inside u
She is flying with the angels
Being 18
Still young and dreaming
Leaving every one behind
Crying.
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Poetry.com 3.6 out of 5 based on 0 ratings. 5 reviews.
DH DONOVAN More than 1 year ago
Good grasp of emotions.
Hopeless Dreamer More than 1 year ago
Sorry to hear, my condolences
Tracy Bollinger More than 1 year ago
Hear-wrenching, through and through.
anthony everson More than 1 year ago
Thanks for the review. My first attempt at poetry.
Faith Cramer More than 1 year ago
A bit confusing about a grandma who is 18 years old but I like it.
anthony everson More than 1 year ago
Well, she is stuck thinking that she is still 18 due the cancer, she is not clearly thinking.
ROSE PADGETT More than 1 year ago
BUT AN 18 YEAR OLD WITH GRANDSON?? MAYBE SOME REVISING
anthony everson More than 1 year ago
Well, she is stuck thinking that she is still 18 due the cancer, she is not clearly thinking. Sorry for this, i should have made it clear in the about section.
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