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Winter Dance

On the day that death took leave,
Leafs fell from amber covered trees,
When autumn turns to ice
And frigid winds bend,
Death will surely pay its price.
 
Its soul was sold
To turn back the cold
Gripping tightly, had no chance
Written in bloody romance
 
Consuming eternally, lips of red
Black mask to hide
Bitter dance of dread.
 
Selling souls
Compelling roles
Here you hide in masks of dye
 
 
Death will seek you
It will find you.
Searching,
Lurching toward your end. 
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Dips Lawati More than 1 year ago
I thought i hav reviewed .Anyway its a sad poem
Nash Thomas More than 1 year ago
see my poems too
Masy More than 1 year ago
good i thik it is mor clear dont need my thought or trying to understand
Susan Meehan More than 1 year ago
An old poem I wrote. I thought about editing it and adding to it, but I felt like that would take away from what I felt when I wrote it so long ago. This was my feelings, my emotions at that time and I would not have that changed just to make this a "better" poem. :)
Poetry.com 4.4 out of 5 based on 0 ratings. 66 reviews.
Robyn Ivings More than 1 year ago
I can totally see this being on a Tim Burton short stop motion animation :) I love the similes and symbolism about Death. Very well written! Thank You for sharing!
Dips Lawati More than 1 year ago
yea thou art reached to the poem
Atanu Mukherji More than 1 year ago
Excellently written Susan. Deep philosophy and nice choice of words
Dips Lawati More than 1 year ago
As a critic u need to be good in judgement rather than exaggerating so that he has a room to correct it
Dips Lawati More than 1 year ago
nice judgement
Gilded goddess of goth More than 1 year ago
Wonderful, mind rating mine? Yours was fantastic
Dips Lawati More than 1 year ago
Sorry see his use of lang and parole
Raihan Imthiyaz More than 1 year ago
Give me advise to my poems.
Dips Lawati More than 1 year ago
I didn't ken what u mean
Patrick Boyd More than 1 year ago
Would you mind reading my poems and give me advice?
Dips Lawati More than 1 year ago
Ok
Alaina Turner More than 1 year ago
i like the vocabulary simple for anyone to understand but complex to make it well written
Dips Lawati More than 1 year ago
Yea yours n mine little matched see the lang n parole in first stanza,does it make sense in two tenses
Dips Lawati More than 1 year ago
got it
Dips Lawati More than 1 year ago
thee got it
Chris Trzcinski More than 1 year ago
awesome poem I can relate to this poem its the time of year i dread the days are very short col and full of darkness
Dips Lawati More than 1 year ago
good .the got the content
Robert Vega More than 1 year ago
Really like it
Dips Lawati More than 1 year ago
read content
Alexandru Guzzonato More than 1 year ago
Kudos for one one of the best pastels I have ever read.
julio montenegro More than 1 year ago
that was incredible
Dips Lawati More than 1 year ago
Sorry
Dips Lawati More than 1 year ago
nice
Bianca Goddard More than 1 year ago
So powerful!!!
Dips Lawati More than 1 year ago
yea thou art found it
Brandon Tucky More than 1 year ago
Brilliant!
Dips Lawati More than 1 year ago
good
Cheyanne Evasco More than 1 year ago
It was Beautiful
Dips Lawati More than 1 year ago
There is no beaut knees in it rather pathetic so go through it once
Dips Lawati More than 1 year ago
good
www internet slaves More than 1 year ago
Moonlight
Sheena Vasani More than 1 year ago
love it!
Dips Lawati More than 1 year ago
good
Misa Chan More than 1 year ago
deep,beautiful n melancholic
Dips Lawati More than 1 year ago
yea good
sri devi More than 1 year ago
death come one day. true, lot is explored here
Dips Lawati More than 1 year ago
me think thee got the clue
Erica Galloway More than 1 year ago
very lovly my bows to you great poetic .
Dips Lawati More than 1 year ago
Sorry may I was wrong to emerge in it
Jared Thomas More than 1 year ago
Definitely layered with talent.. Keep it up
Japleen Kaur More than 1 year ago
keep it up!!!
Dips Lawati More than 1 year ago
how
seemekc seemekc More than 1 year ago
Dark and witty
Nimita Azeez More than 1 year ago
Loved it!
Dips Lawati More than 1 year ago
Good
Dips Lawati More than 1 year ago
good
Andreea-Mădălina Tănase More than 1 year ago
Death will find me alive. Keep up the good work!
Dips Lawati More than 1 year ago
Ok. But read more on Dickenson on Death ok
Roberto Rayo More than 1 year ago
I not a fan or rhyming but I love this
Hassen Gara More than 1 year ago
dealt with a serious topic , powerful words and imagination. Congratulations.I kindly invite you to read my poems DO NOT WRITE HIM OFF , and FLIGHT OF THE EAGLE. eAGER TO GET YOUR FEEDBACK
Dips Lawati More than 1 year ago
Yes. But u need to read more
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