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Let me be

Let me be
can’t you see
I don’t want to be around you.
I seek the silence
never the violence
that you always seem to bring.
You hear my crying
it feels like I’m dying
why can’t you let me be?
Drowning in chains
feelings of pain
do you like to see me this way?
Let me be
can’t you see
I don’t want to be around you.
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Poetry.com 3.8 out of 5 based on 0 ratings. 4 reviews.
Wilma McIvor More than 1 year ago
A well written poem with a powerful message. Keep writing
Yam-tin Martin Wong More than 1 year ago
Jaimie, you have made the right decision, do it!
Joel McWilliams More than 1 year ago
little allegory, however i like the bluntness and the raw emotion in the piece.
Richard Brobst More than 1 year ago
This poem has some strength in its rhymes. The meter could be a bit more "beat" with a little work.
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