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Illusions

 
Illusions play an unsound canny game
It’s passing time, that takes the blame
At times apple falls, it may hit the moon
On twitching of an eye, may rise so soon
Mind a crap-shooter, does not worry sense
Going its own way, be it other side of fence
Looking way back, agnize, lost much, of course
Leaving no way, otherwise, except to remorse
One can not see through, without the Light
The sun, the moon, just the gifted eye sight,
Sand pebbles everyday, dock under the feet
Share of joy and sorrow, one had to greet
Redolent winds leave, nowhere to stay forever
It is unlikely to catch, howsoever, one is clever
Get breathing ample, when they just pass by
Or else, left only to remorse, with tearful sighs
 
01/09/2014
 
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Poetry.com 4.4 out of 5 based on 0 ratings. 11 reviews.
Hasmukh Mehta More than 1 year ago
we can not blame for the game based on illusion
Dushyant Bhola More than 1 year ago
Thanks so much for your precious review.
anonymo magnifico More than 1 year ago
...........but time always prevails....................Good one!!............................................
Dushyant Bhola More than 1 year ago
Thanks so much for your precious review. I appreciate.
Simone Levi More than 1 year ago
Remember to be kind and stay on course The moon will be your guide to find the person with such a beautiful mind Giving us such excellent written verse No anger, no ego, no writing which is terse Just a delicate sharing personal flower That I could read hour after hour. Very nice Dushyant
Dushyant Bhola More than 1 year ago
Thanks so much for your precious poetic review. I appreciate.
Broken Lullabies❤ More than 1 year ago
It's an illusion that gets us all at one time or another. The wise look forward and keep going because time stops for no one. That's my take :) Nice work Dushyant❤
Dushyant Bhola More than 1 year ago
Thanks so much for your precious review. I appreciate.
Stella Vkn More than 1 year ago
ok
ARUN MAZUMDER More than 1 year ago
good
Diana Sitnic More than 1 year ago
bravo wow
Domic Sands More than 1 year ago
A delightful poem
Hassen Gara More than 1 year ago
Enjoyed it .Kindly invite you to check out my poem http://www.poetry.com/poems/1368000-THANKFULNESS.Thank you
Dushyant Bhola More than 1 year ago
Thanks so much for the sincere review.
patrick amoroso More than 1 year ago
It was a bumpy ride...but I enjoyed it...!!!
Dushyant Bhola More than 1 year ago
Thanks so much for the sincere review.
S. Subhashini More than 1 year ago
Good Effort
Dushyant Bhola More than 1 year ago
Thanks so much for the sincere review.
blackorchid thrives More than 1 year ago
It started out well, with the first two lines grabbing my attention, but lines three, four, and five had me utterly lost and confused. I don't understand what they are trying to say until line eight, where it speaks of remorse. The misspelling of agonize as "agnize" irritates me, although I'm not sure if they are taking poetic license here, if it was a typo from not proofing, or if it is and actual misspelling. You aren't even sure what they are remorseful for - just that they are remorseful for something.
Dushyant Bhola More than 1 year ago
Thanks anyway. Black thrives, as no colour can influence it. You again consult dictionary, 'agnize' or 'agnise', both are correct, they are synonyms of realize Thanks for the review.
Simone Levi More than 1 year ago
Black swallows all light, there is a hole that encompasses all in it's path.
blackorchid thrives More than 1 year ago
I see what you meant now - I was reading it wrong, thinking you meant agonize, as in suffering mental anguish over something, not agnize/agnise as in acknowledging something. My bad. I am still confused as to what you are trying to say. I really ddin't want to review anyone's poems but the site wouldn't let me post unless I reviewed two. If it makes you feel any better, I am doubly irritated by my own typo in the review where I have "and" instead of "an", but this site does not allow me to go in and correct it. Oh well.
johndoe doe More than 1 year ago
Mmmmmmm........nuub...
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