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ODYSSEY

They were travelling together, in the train
His love song murmurs, she could not abstain
Stealing glances at her, he desired to be friend
Unwillingly resist contact, on tracks thru bends
She straightened up hair, sliding on her face
Shifts tufts, hiding eyes, that leaves a trace
Gave a knowing look, as from the past birth
Smirch on her face, like the spring on earth
Absorbed deep, she hardly had word to speak
Her heart deluged, for untold promises to keep
As the storm gathers, take off needing a touch
Drowning in her eyes, looks no escape, as such
Unexpected drizzle, when distracted their stance
Cogitating towards window, she pulled a glance
Dread of getting drenched, on getting off the rail
 
‘May I escort you,’ his voice sanguine, but frail
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♡ POEMAHONTAS ♡ POEMADONNA ♡ More than 1 year ago
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Jawahar Gupta More than 1 year ago
Raasta Chahe Lamba ho Manzil saaf deekhai deni chaheeye mere man, I LOVE you my friend, Happy Deepawali,
Dushyant Bhola More than 1 year ago
Belated Happy Diwali to you also.
Jawahar Gupta More than 1 year ago
Good Friends are Sunshine,
Poetry.com 4.4 out of 5 based on 0 ratings. 14 reviews.
CHELSEA WILLIAMS More than 1 year ago
I became the poem.....great details, I didn't want it to end.....well written please keep sharing your talent
Dushyant Bhola More than 1 year ago
Thanks for the kind words. I appreciate.
Jawahar Gupta More than 1 year ago
MAY I ESCORT YOU Dear DUSHYANT,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,WONDERFUL /..//////////////////
Dushyant Bhola More than 1 year ago
Missed you all these days. Thanks.
Jawahar Gupta More than 1 year ago
i am happy to meet you again on line,, Good Friends are sunshine, ~~~Jawahar Gupta ~~
Hassen Gara More than 1 year ago
Good write .Insightful content .Kindly invite you to check out my poem http://poetry.com/poems/1439215-THE-SACRED-ROSES-OF-LIFE.Thank you
Dushyant Bhola More than 1 year ago
Nice compliments. I appreciate your review.
ARUN MAZUMDER More than 1 year ago
good
jennifer baker's More than 1 year ago
Gosh they found each other on the same side of the tracks! 
Kelsie co 6 months ago
Great details.   Loved it. 
Sultan Hamad 3 months ago
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Tom Breakwell More than 1 year ago
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Dushyant Bhola More than 1 year ago
Nice compliments. I appreciate your review.
Suzette Cozad More than 1 year ago
good content
Dushyant Bhola More than 1 year ago
Nice compliments. I appreciate your review.
Susan Drakley More than 1 year ago
well written smiles warmly
Dushyant Bhola More than 1 year ago
Nice compliments. I appreciate your review
christopher payne More than 1 year ago
Loved it
CLINT 11 months ago
Lots of feeling 
Joe Topich 7 months ago
Good story in rhyme needs a little better time
Ester Grace More than 1 year ago
Poem expertly describes a kind of social contact in romantic slow mo. Good write!
Dushyant Bhola More than 1 year ago
. I appreciate your review.
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