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judgement

Who are you to judging?
Did you forget your skeletons behind the doors?
You rant and rave about everyone else,
Yet, you forgot about yours.

Nobody is perfect,
Each have regrets they made in life,
One day yours will surface,
Oh, they will come to light.

A picture perfect world,
Is what you want others to see,
Deep down the truth is known,
Your mistakes to be.

Don't pass judgement,
Until you look into yourself,
You can't buy happiness,
It can't be bought with wealth.

Each scar we carry,
Is a stepping stone of our life,
Some let it appear,
Others cover it up with lies.

You bring others down,
Just to please you,
Your history book tells all,
Will eventually see what's true.
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Poetry.com 4.3 out of 5 based on 0 ratings. 22 reviews.
Dusty Burkhamer More than 1 year ago
I can relate..Nice wording. 
Cece Sparkle More than 1 year ago
I love your poem <3 I'm currently writing a poem about three young girls who bullied me just because they think they're that.
Matt Dahlstrom More than 1 year ago
making new friend
Nicholas Goffredo More than 1 year ago
Your revelations are wrapped up in a powerful mixture of metaphor and imagery that Is uniquely distinct. Really enjoy your work. Can you review my poem titled Plasma? Thanks!!!
Darlene Boucher Schorr More than 1 year ago
Loved it!  If only everyone would think before they talk.
Sosuke Ken More than 1 year ago
Great work
TIMOTHY More than 1 year ago
I thought it was pretty good. I am not professional but it seemed to flow better than most.
Tina RSH 8 months ago
I hate judgements. And you illustrate it in your words very well.
Ellen Wolfson 8 months ago
Wow!  I am pinning this one to my pinterest board!  Seriously!  People drive us nuts, and thank God we have our art as a form of emotional expression!  Wish I could meet you!
elio challita 6 months ago
the best words to fit for an astonishing meaning 
Carol Swift 25 days ago
I just love this poem. I feel that way every day just by being around people I know.
bijim dominic More than 1 year ago
Good one
Nick Alopolas More than 1 year ago
You did
Jermarian Cobb More than 1 year ago
It is creative
Amy Luxon 11 months ago
I think we ALL know that one hypocrate out there who judges everyone els like they have never done anything 
Jonathan Vermaak 6 months ago
That was an very interesting read. Thanks 
darren de leon 5 months ago
got the message clear
Vanessa Siegell-Sotak More than 1 year ago
It's good i like the message
Jordan Bute More than 1 year ago
I enjoy the formality used in addressing your reader directly.  It is intense and erotic, though makes us worry of our vainness and ego.  I cannot imagine confronting my longings in a similar fashion.
Bob Brennan More than 1 year ago
I gave you 3 stars on the structure and gentle rhyme scheme, I read a couple other poems you wrote and haven't reviewed then yet, this isn't your best. You have good imagery usually, this feels like you wrote from boredom not emotion.
V. Paul Hall 9 months ago
I can't give you points for rhyming.  There were only three true rhymes in the entire work.  The rest were near rhymes, and close only counts in the game of horseshoes.  I give you points for the theme.  Most humans tend to judge others, but are blind to their own faults.
Jerry Wilson 8 months ago
Judging people isn't rite and those who do it are usually worse than who their judging. Good expression
Keep on writing.
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