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tonight I found you

New to this moment,
Softness in your eyes,
I pull you closer,
Comfort is where we lie.

Try but you can't,
To give your heart away,
You clench and you hold,
That's your only way.

Anxious for this time,
Anticipate your every move,
Nervousness fills the air,
Softly spoken to soothe.

Eyes searching for something,
Looking deep within me,
To fulfill a dream,
Only you can see.

Close eyes lightly now,
No sight is needed,
Only fingers to touch,
Where pain is depleted.

There deep inside of you,
Stirs an empty hole,
This life kept pouring,
That cracked your soul.

But tonight sits new,
Is broken heart mending,
Tonight is the night,
As love is pending.

Waiting to decide on,
Sending signals be code,
Only time will interpret,
Doorway open or closed.

Eyes sit open wide,
Speaking into the dark,
A reflection of me,
Looking through to your heart.

Words wished to speak,
Tongue you held tight,
But actions spoke more,
I found you tonight.

I proceeded with caution,
And waited on you,
Your patience stood still,
Eyes decided, they drew.

A map to feel,
To what you know as true,
Behind your perfect kiss,
Whispers I love you.
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Cice Rivera 8 months ago
I shared on twitter!
Poetry.com 4.7 out of 5 based on 0 ratings. 59 reviews.
Wendy Hines More than 1 year ago
Very deep and moving. Filled with emotion. 
Franba Ciscon Ampermou More than 1 year ago
Let me want to sink into a dream with my girl friend!
Oludamilare Daniel 10 months ago
lilove it
Daniela Carter More than 1 year ago
Good job
Walter Kibler More than 1 year ago
First time love is strange to say the least. Desires flare and your caution warns, but you push on anyway. I know. At time your love is so strong that at times, in spite of hell, you will carry the relationship to the end hoping for the best. 
Olatunde Adebesin More than 1 year ago
This is a great work. The imagery, the language,...it's fantastic.
Uncommonly Common More than 1 year ago
This has inspired me to keep writing. Thank you
Amiadra Arrington More than 1 year ago
Awesome work
Tony Gurhy 11 months ago
I like your skill. Your poems are well written. You give inspiration 
Richard Stephan More than 1 year ago
good one Holly....you rocked it!  Need a theme song?  ...here's a reward from the #BlackCrowes ...they'll call you by your name if you need to go....  @ https://youtu.be/8_5U0M9ErGA?list=RDEMiV2DBqq_rS42vIatbNOI0Q
Mitchell renfro More than 1 year ago
Excellent work
Adam Shultz 12 months ago
Well done.
John Cravens Sr. More than 1 year ago
Good read.  Thanks for sharing!
Muhammad Khalid Khan 10 months ago
I enjoyed it
Edmond Myers More than 1 year ago
touching the readers inner being well done
Anthony Robinson More than 1 year ago
touched my  heart
Nicholas Goffredo More than 1 year ago
What an incredible love poem. How could he not give in? Your words were brilliantly placed and formulated incredible imagery. Life kept pouring into his cracked soul. Unbelievable!!!
S. Subhashini 9 months ago
Very nicely expressed
Loved the easy flow of words

Keep writing and sharing
Donka Krsteva More than 1 year ago
touches the most delicate vibes of the heart; beautifully written
Stella W More than 1 year ago
Good share--  Good read--  Thank you for sharing your work here
MN Aries More than 1 year ago
very good 
Janice Brown More than 1 year ago
Words of love and passion
Nong Tibs More than 1 year ago
wish i was yours
Jan Small More than 1 year ago
Very touching
Katie Fornelius 10 months ago
Very beautiful, nice rhythm 
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