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Breezy effect!

Playfully the breeze
Winks and gives a sneeze
The weather is changing
And so I feel
The breeze has caught a cold chill
So it blows low, it blows high and then it crashes
Into the yard and the flowers catch its cold part by part
God then sends a warm shower and this gives a medicinal power to the breeze
So the breeze sinks low and deep and goes into a healing sleep
Then a rainbow comes out which warms the clouds and the cold is out!
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Breezy effect! , by Seema Ali 4.5 out of 5 based on 0 ratings. 8 reviews.
Ps Bindu Prasad More than 1 year ago
Beautiful lines
Sammer Ghouleh 10 months ago
Good 
ARUN MAZUMDER 6 months ago
good
Tapiwa Gumbie 8 months ago
No no no this is too much
Tapiwa Gumbie 8 months ago
Too good
Santosh Kandalkar Nana 11 days ago
The changes in weather are beautifully presented. Keen observations of nature and artistically blended in the form of a wonderful poem.
bijim dominic More than 1 year ago
Good.
Hine Ngaro More than 1 year ago
This is so refreshing. Thank you for posting.
Jermarian Cobb 10 months ago
It was very good
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