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Life song: when I was admitted into hospital !

Feeling the last breathe,
On the way to hospital !
So near but still so far-
‘Life’ versus the ‘life in death’!

That creates some worried hours
My wife and I was almost
To be departed’ but love!

Ye’ that was crying some hours
About to be bidding good bye
To my dearest neighbor woods’
To whom passed’ I times a lots
Seeking solace just a bit
Whenever feeling exile!

That was in fact bothering lots
Heart feeling pain in the beats…
Saw mom's face on the car-glasses..
Whispering’ my late father’s calling
Sounding from the heaven, “my son,
Come quick to me here’ in hereafter!”

It was a pity,
Absolutely a pity!
Who wanna get departed
From this evergreen rhymes?

Copyright © 2016 Azizul Maqsud
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Life song: when I was admitted into hospital !, by Azizul Maqsud 4.7 out of 5 based on 0 ratings. 6 reviews.
Ps Bindu Prasad More than 1 year ago
Very good
Azizul Maqsud More than 1 year ago
Feeling love to all..
Joyce Anthappen More than 1 year ago
ARUN MAZUMDER More than 1 year ago
well done
Louisa yiew More than 1 year ago
Mawiyah Merriweather More than 1 year ago
I like your poem, that a sad experience know one deserve. Love is to be tested!
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