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Behold

Splash2 by louie B
I saw
and I saw
what is it seen?
behold I saw a people happy or sad.
beheld to such low standards.
un true un seen un heard of...
a plane a plain a flat plane?
behold a fool buried deep in the billows underground.
is this what I had wanted you to see?
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Behold, by louie B 3.3 out of 5 based on 0 ratings. 6 reviews.
Yudi Shah 7 months ago
great
Terrance(TEEDUB) Johnson 6 months ago
LIKED!
Jawahar Gupta 9 months ago
I Wish Louie B
let us 
ALL BE
HEALTHY
WEALTHY
AND
FREE FROM ALL SUFFERINGS,
~~~Jawahar Gupta ~~
Jawahar Gupta 9 months ago
hello my friend
I invite you to review my this poem
http://poetry.com/poems/1442140-WORDS-TO-SLEEPING-DAUGHTER
Ps Bindu Prasad 9 months ago
Good
Poet Jahangir Rustom 8 months ago
good work
Robert Wallace 8 days ago
just a bunch of words spelled similar with different meanings .. this did not have any feeling or emotion ... I was no better for having read it ... some of these reviews are for fear of getting bad reviews back in return ...  at least I am honest ...
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