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Splash2 by louie B
When you are in learning,
have you wondered, should be learning?
Hard to admit? Its not anger, its never pain....
We suffer for our hope. Hope in the everlasting....
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When i was in learned i have wondered, i have dreamed.
I saw color, and vivid images of mankind.
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I saw a people, separated. unseen, of the unimagined.
I was looking, at what i had seen.
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I could not imagine the dwelling sorrow. of imaged anguish. and pain..
What were they was selling?
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They published in vain, to ease stop the pain.
but the sycamore tree had grew no more.
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To bear this burden, of hopeless, and anguish, and pain...

The key points of my poem is about a system of learning. a truth we all seek or search to find.
the words to bear this burden is my attempt to bear the burden of the human condition. America as I see or as I had saw in general natural disasters and the people affected. I now see even more truth full visions and the hillery lou cage confection. the reason for this condition is I had strived to write my poem, I strive to open the eyes of the unimaginable horrors portrayed on a people of faith. in clear concise manner with a simple twist that evil can not see. and will never control good will always be my master. a civilization divided must fall, how sad..

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Flat , by louie B 4 out of 5 based on 0 ratings. 6 reviews.
louie B More than 1 year ago
lerned
Spirit of JESUS Save Help Truth More than 1 year ago
God love you and he needs you keep going WITH him
Diana Sitnic More than 1 year ago
bravo wow
Ritika Mallik More than 1 year ago
written nicely
Coy Day More than 1 year ago
good
Rachelle DeBretagne More than 1 year ago
If you need help with your spelling and grammar, I am always happy to help.
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