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Journys end

Splash2 by louie B
Set out to find a stone
journeys end far from home.
Stares with bewildering eyes.
fleeted feelings of a solar storm on fire.
dragged by the heels its desire...
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Journys end, by louie B 3.9 out of 5 based on 0 ratings. 11 reviews.
Amy Luxon 8 months ago
love it 
Jerry Stiles 7 months ago
Great poem,,short but powerful..
CLINT 6 months ago
Really liked it
Suzanne Wells Villafuentes 17 days ago
The corner stone is my rock
darren de leon 22 days ago
nice piece
Joe Topich 22 days ago
Short but meaningful
Nadia Ziad 6 months ago
Steven Ernest Lee Cummings 5 months ago
Branden Hurst 19 days ago
I appreciate the lyrical rhyming and assonance of each line but I feel it's very subjective - it could be about literally anything. This is not necessarily a bad thing but you sound like a 13yr old just chucked some words together so that they rhyme I mean "Solar storm on fire" - you just wanted to have assonance with "eyes" but the number of syllables is wrong. Also your punctuation is slightly off - you have a run on line at the start but are you saying the journey is made of stone? Or are you saying that you are on a journey to find a metaphorical stone? hmmm. For these reasons I give it a 2 star.
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