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weak and helpless. that is me. wobbly road. weak and unable to hold on to the handle. I went through the darkening street. sunshine reluctant to go out. eyes blurred. footsteps stagger. that is me. increasingly weak and powerless. I pray, O friend. so god with me and always dear to me for now and forever
**faisalfahmimarpaung**
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END, by Faisal Fahmi Marpaung 4 out of 5 based on 0 ratings. 7 reviews.
Uma Natarajan 7 days ago
well said
Jawahar Gupta 7 days ago
Very
Involving
Composition
Sweet Honey Dove 7 days ago
expression
of
experience
Faisal Fahmi Marpaung 7 days ago
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kta shukkoor 7 days ago
nice work
J Beynon 7 days ago
For this being short which isn't a bad thing, this is a very powerful poem of expression. Great work!
Walter Jackson 7 days ago
Sorry about his weakness and his inability to state them.Separate your ideas into paragraph form to add clarity.
Faisal Fahmi Marpaung 7 days ago
thanks walter.  you help me for my word
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