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Came to my mind a wonderful thought
I could be an astronaut,
High, higher, highest heightened flight
All it would be matter of height,
Though the challenge of gravity zero
However I would be a cosmic hero,
While maneuvering through dark space
I would feel a thrill of cosmic race,
Awesome would be life! Awesome its way!
My fantastic space odyssey through Milky Way,
Sun, moon, stars, planets and comets
All would be my bosom cosmic mates,
Back way Earth, when I would enter atmosphere
I would see a lovely magnificent sphere,
However it would only be land and water
And splendid beautiful blue matter,
But Oh! On this globe play poor human creatures
Indulged in Earthly matter, created their own cultures,
It seems vivid, they have no vision
They follow the basic tenet of division,
Nations, races, pedigrees, clans, religions and creeds
All created boundaries feed their sadistic needs,
They have fought unwarranted many wars
And buried in earth billions of stars,
However fully inflated with cosmic peace and mirth
I would land on this ignorant Earth.
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Astronaut, by Subhashchandra Adhav 4.9 out of 5 based on 0 ratings. 8 reviews.
Lalithamba Avadhanam More than 1 year ago
the truth you perceived is great
Blake Grantham More than 1 year ago
Intrigued by the imagination of your work.  Lifted me to the heavens and beyond, then back to this rock of ignorance!!
Subhashchandra Adhav More than 1 year ago
I could be an astronaut !
cignolago (swanlake) More than 1 year ago
... Unfortunately 
Peace on Earth
amber talwar More than 1 year ago

There's not a line unmeaningful

we are dived up in races..

ignorant earth

ARUN MAZUMDER More than 1 year ago
Sweet Honey Dove More than 1 year ago
I would see a lovely magnificent sphere, 
However it would only be land and water 
And splendid beautiful blue matter, 

excellent poem
dear subhash
full of passion ! :)
DeAnn Leal More than 1 year ago
I thought really good keep the dream alive.
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