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Astronaut (Resubmit)

Astronaut

Came to my mind a wonderful thought
I could be an astronaut,
High, higher, highest heightened flight
All it would be matter of height,
Though the challenge of gravity zero
However I would be a cosmic hero,
While maneuvering through dark space
I would feel a thrill of cosmic race,
Awesome would be life! Awesome its way!
My fantastic space odyssey through Milky Way,
Sun, moon, stars, planets and comets
All would be my bosom cosmic mates,
Back way Earth, when I would enter atmosphere
I would see a lovely magnificent sphere,
However it would only be land and water
And splendid beautiful blue matter,
But Oh! On this globe play poor human creatures
Indulged in Earthly matter, created their own cultures,
It seems vivid, they have no vision
They follow the basic tenet of division,
Nations, races, pedigrees, clans, religions and creeds
All created boundaries feed their sadistic needs,
They have fought unwarranted many wars
And buried in earth billions of stars,
However fully inflated with cosmic peace and mirth
I would land on this ignorant Earth.
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Astronaut (Resubmit), by Subhashchandra Adhav 5 out of 5 based on 0 ratings. 4 reviews.
Sweet Honey Dove 3 months ago
I would see a lovely magnificent sphere, 
However it would only be land and water 
And splendid beautiful blue matter, 

excellent poem
dear subhash
full of passion ! :)

(same review as before...)
Subhashchandra Adhav 3 months ago
Thanks generous SHD for your  splendid review !
Subhashchandra Adhav 3 months ago
I so appreciate your encouraging complimentary words !
Sweet Honey Dove 3 months ago
~LOVE~
Sonja Carnes 3 months ago
Very creative,and interesting! I loved this.
Subhashchandra Adhav 3 months ago
Thanks so kindly Sonja for your excellent review.
Subhashchandra Adhav 3 months ago
Thanks indeed for your nice appreciation.
Subhashchandra Adhav 3 months ago
Blessing be with you,Sonja1
Subhashchandra Adhav 3 months ago
I could be an astronaut !
Subhashchandra Adhav 3 months ago
Thank you all my readers to love my poem.!
Subhashchandra Adhav 3 months ago
Wish you a happy read !
Subhashchandra Adhav 3 months ago
Happy Today!
Subhashchandra Adhav 3 months ago
I appreciate the heartfelt support of my readers.!
Cassie Rose 3 months ago
This is beautiful!
Subhashchandra Adhav 3 months ago
Thanks so kindly  Cassie for your beautiful review.!
Subhashchandra Adhav 3 months ago
Thanks indeed for your nice appreciation.
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