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Cancer

Cancer

The cancer has eaten
Inside of me
Hollowed it limbs
And rendered helpless me

Where could be
That malignant crab?
I wished, it
Somehow I could grab

But the cells cancerous
Turned ferocious
Making me anxious
Beleaguered my soul precious

To appease my inner core
I went to the shore
Me the hollowed body
Before me vast water body

Infinite water and its endless sprawl
The crab inside began to crawl
Allured it big water body
Left it my mean decayed body
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Cancer, by Subhashchandra Adhav 4.6 out of 5 based on 0 ratings. 11 reviews.
Lou Leccese 8 months ago
This is amazing work. 
Subhashchandra Adhav 8 months ago
Thanks so kindly Lou for your excellent comment !
Subhashchandra Adhav 8 months ago
Thanks indeed for your nice appreciation.!
Sikha Kumari 8 months ago
Nicely written 
Subhashchandra Adhav 8 months ago
Many thanks so kindly Shikha for your excellent review.
Subhashchandra Adhav 8 months ago
Thanks indeed for your nice appreciation.
Lori Dixon 8 months ago
Very good 
Subhashchandra Adhav 8 months ago
Many thanks so kindly  Lori  for your  complimentary words.
Subhashchandra Adhav 8 months ago
Thanks indeed for your nice appreciation.
Angel Jones 8 months ago
The hungry thief who could leave one crumpled on the concrete has breathed air into you. You float gracefully like a feather painting the pages with water-colored roses for us to behold. Triumphant and Brave!
Subhashchandra Adhav 8 months ago
Many thanks so kindly Angel for your wonderful and beautiful review.
Subhashchandra Adhav 8 months ago
Thanks indeed for your heartfelt and soulful appreciation.
Angarika Barthakur 8 months ago
The struggle of cancer patient. Quite beautifully written

Subhashchandra Adhav 8 months ago
Thanks so kindly Angarika for your amazing review.
Subhashchandra Adhav 8 months ago
Thanks indeed for your nice appreciation.!
Fran McClelland 8 months ago
Inspired flow of intense and descriptive words paint the portrait of faith overcoming 'decay' .
Water give us spiritual life !! Nicely done, Subhash ! 
Subhashchandra Adhav 8 months ago
Many thanks so kindly Fran for your marvelous and precise review.
Subhashchandra Adhav 8 months ago
Thanks indeed for your nice appreciation.
Subhashchandra Adhav 8 months ago
Left it my mean decayed body !
Subhashchandra Adhav 8 months ago
Thank you all my readers to love my poem.
Subhashchandra Adhav 8 months ago
Wish you a happy read.!
Subhashchandra Adhav 8 months ago
Happy Today!
Michael Alcott 8 months ago
its very well written and i like it
Subhashchandra Adhav 8 months ago
Thanks so kindly Michael for your excellent review!
Subhashchandra Adhav 8 months ago
Thanks indeed for your nice appreciation.
Jawahar Gupta 8 months ago
touching
the
psyche of the reader
Subhash,
Subhashchandra Adhav 8 months ago
Thanks so kindly for your nice review.
Subhashchandra Adhav 8 months ago
Thanks indeed for your nice appreciation.
Anoop Upadhyaya 8 months ago
God job
Subhashchandra Adhav 8 months ago
Thanks so kindly for your nice review.!
Subhashchandra Adhav 8 months ago
Thanks indeed for your nice appreciation.
Hollis Honeycutt 8 months ago
Had a family member with this illness I understand the tragic of life 
Subhashchandra Adhav 8 months ago
Thanks so kindly for your heartfelt words.
Subhashchandra Adhav 8 months ago
Thanks indeed for your nice appreciation

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