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Divine Win


Divine Win

Knocked the Heaven’s gate
His soul
However he left behind
Gem filled bowl

Gem filled bowl
Left on Earth
Around it, his kin
Dancing with mirth

They were praying
For his soul
However they eyed on
The gem filled bowl

Each gem have had
In born defect of sin
That was not
Easily seen

They shared gems
So also unseen sin
Thus his soul entered Heaven
With a divine win
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Divine Win, by Subhashchandra Adhav 4.8 out of 5 based on 0 ratings. 8 reviews.
Sonja Carnes 8 days ago
Awesome work! You have another good poem! I enjoyed reading your work! It's amazing!
Thank You!
Subhashchandra Adhav 8 days ago
His soul entered Heaven 
With a divine win !
cignolago (swanlake) 8 days ago
Excellent, subtle poem 

PS sincere thanks for your kind and thoughtful reviews of my poems. Your words are most appreciated. 

amber talwar 8 days ago

Your talent can never. Be underestimated.

his soul entered. Heaven

with a divine win.

Lori Dixon 8 days ago
Wow deep 
Jawahar Gupta 8 days ago
The Truth of Life
One day
we leave
everything
behind
While moving to
Heavenly abode,
~~~~Jawahar Gupta ~~~
Coy Day 8 days ago
good
Pamela Smitherman 8 days ago
Loved your poem. 
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