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What to say

Unknown feeling tapped door of my heart
Unique emotion gurgled and tightened my feelings

Iwent to sleep but the feeling peeped
Slowly it creeped and bloomed

Mind reeled and heart was heavy
Wondered how to convey

Time was ticking and anxiety grew
Tuning the eagrness i made up my mind

Like a shinig star i gathered thestrength
Like a rain i poured my feelings

I remained calm and he gave his hand
Inside feelings fluttered like s butterfly and i held him and carved a space in his heart

Like a garden full of fragrance
My garden of love groomed
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What to say, by Shobha Raman 4.5 out of 5 based on 0 ratings. 2 reviews.
Shobha Raman 3 months ago
Blooms like a flower in the garden of love
Pankaj Kanaujia 3 months ago
Became cryptic.unknown feelings in the first line becomes clear in the 3rd line to last.needs patience un to last.had better let it come naturally
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