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If mind is stressed

If mind is stressed
U neasiness skies

Focus deviates
Flowing thoughts get shrouded

Clarity veils
Inaction strides

Physical discomfort
Patience declines

Rose flower blooms with fragrance
But thorn pr*cks

At ease mind is fresh like rose
Mind is stressed it seems bushy feel some thorns pricking

Irritant mood
Frustration shoots
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If mind is stressed, by Shobha Raman 4.6 out of 5 based on 0 ratings. 5 reviews.
Sonja Carnes 10 months ago
Very interesting and intriguing work here!
Shobha Raman 10 months ago
Thoughts get clouded
Pankaj Kanaujia 10 months ago
Your portrayal on difficult matters like psycho-illness in and smooth way is praisworthy
Hughy Huggins 10 months ago
Nice - Can relate.
Kristy Haynes Dillard 10 months ago
good poetry but often feel that way keep writing
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