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If mind is stressed

If mind is stressed
U neasiness skies

Focus deviates
Flowing thoughts get shrouded

Clarity veils
Inaction strides

Physical discomfort
Patience declines

Rose flower blooms with fragrance
But thorn pr*cks

At ease mind is fresh like rose
Mind is stressed it seems bushy feel some thorns pricking

Irritant mood
Frustration shoots
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If mind is stressed, by Shobha Raman 4.6 out of 5 based on 0 ratings. 5 reviews.
Sonja Carnes 6 months ago
Very interesting and intriguing work here!
Shobha Raman 6 months ago
Thoughts get clouded
Pankaj Kanaujia 6 months ago
Your portrayal on difficult matters like psycho-illness in and smooth way is praisworthy
Hughy Huggins 6 months ago
Nice - Can relate.
Kristy Haynes Dillard 6 months ago
good poetry but often feel that way keep writing
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